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eldritchhobbit ([personal profile] eldritchhobbit) wrote2016-10-28 07:19 am
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Halloween Countdown Day 28: Snow by John Davidson

Once I saw upon an object-glass,
Martyred beneath a microscope,
One elaborate snow-flake slowly pass,
Dying hard, beyond the reach of hope.

Still from shape to shape the crystal changed,
Writhing in its agony; and still,
Less and less elaborate, arranged
Potently the angle of its will.

Tortured to a simple final form,
Angles six and six divergent beams,
Lo, in death it touched the perfect norm,
Verifying all its crystal dreams.

- John Davidson, Snow


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[identity profile] jan-u-wine.livejournal.com 2016-10-28 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
ah, that's lovely!

just an analogy for all of the *flakes* out there, innit? What an echoing irony that the closest pass to 'perfection' is that last, stretched-with-fingers-clutching-at-eternity one of 'life'.

In this short three verses lies a whole landscape of 'what is life' (oh, noooooo not THAT song) and 'what is death'

And the picture is perfection!

[identity profile] eldritchhobbit.livejournal.com 2016-10-29 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love your reaction to this! Yes, yes!

I'm so glad you liked both the poem and the picture.