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Once I saw upon an object-glass,
Martyred beneath a microscope,
One elaborate snow-flake slowly pass,
Dying hard, beyond the reach of hope.

Still from shape to shape the crystal changed,
Writhing in its agony; and still,
Less and less elaborate, arranged
Potently the angle of its will.

Tortured to a simple final form,
Angles six and six divergent beams,
Lo, in death it touched the perfect norm,
Verifying all its crystal dreams.

- John Davidson, Snow


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Date: 2016-10-28 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jan-u-wine.livejournal.com
ah, that's lovely!

just an analogy for all of the *flakes* out there, innit? What an echoing irony that the closest pass to 'perfection' is that last, stretched-with-fingers-clutching-at-eternity one of 'life'.

In this short three verses lies a whole landscape of 'what is life' (oh, noooooo not THAT song) and 'what is death'

And the picture is perfection!

Date: 2016-10-29 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eldritchhobbit.livejournal.com
Oh, I love your reaction to this! Yes, yes!

I'm so glad you liked both the poem and the picture.

Date: 2016-10-28 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilda-elise.livejournal.com
Wow, finding misery wherever you look.

Date: 2016-10-29 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eldritchhobbit.livejournal.com
And yet perfection, too!
From: [identity profile] acciochocolate.livejournal.com
Amazing poem! Reminds me somewhat of a poem that I read/heard on NPR's The Writer's Almanac abt wasps trying to save their children from a poison spray. I have never looked at wasps in the same way.

Caspar David Freidrich is one of my fave artists; I was introduced to him in a history of art course in college. :) Pity that some of his work was lost in WWII!
Edited Date: 2016-10-28 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eldritchhobbit.livejournal.com
Wow, that sounds like a truly chilling poem.

Caspar David Freidrich is one of my fave artists; I was introduced to him in a history of art course in college. :)

Oh, wonderful! I love his sense of scale. He puts me in my place and creates such awe, you know?

Pity that some of his work was lost in WWII!

Yes, indeed. A terrible loss.

Date: 2016-10-28 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] litlover12.livejournal.com
What a powerful poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Date: 2016-10-29 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eldritchhobbit.livejournal.com
My pleasure! I'm so happy you liked it.

Date: 2016-10-28 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ankh-hpl.livejournal.com
Excellent & unexpected offering today. Thanks for posting this dark little gem!

Date: 2016-10-29 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eldritchhobbit.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.

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